Restoration retouch

A photoshoot for a friend who is opening her own fashion store and needed some of the outfits modelled. This image as you can tell went a little wrong and so I beat it to death until it started to play fair. I welcome any advice retouchers have regarding the out come, or any comments for that matter

Credits
Model: Lola Lyndhurst
WD: Beth Syer-Clarke @ Whatthefrockonline.com (coming soon)

Camera: Nikon Coolpix3200 (yeah, yeah I know!)
PPhotoshop CS4
Aiptek A4 widescreen graphics tablet.